Rain
Rain comes down from the cloud,
The water in the ground evaporates,
And goes to the sky,
And forms black clouds,
The clouds get heavy,
The rain comes down,
And fills the lake,ocean,ponds...
All organisms depend on water to survive.
Rain comes down from the cloud,
The water in the ground evaporates,
And goes to the sky,
And forms black clouds,
The clouds get heavy,
The rain comes down,
And fills the lake,ocean,ponds...
All organisms depend on water to survive.
1 comment:
Good effort.
I appreciate that you have understood the rain process but good poems requires interpretations. I remebre a good tamil movie song
Mugilinangal Alaigirathey Mugavarigal Tholainthanavo
Mugavarigal Thavariyathaal Azhuthidumo Athu Mazhaiyo.
This is a very good imagination about rain. The poet imagines rain as
'because clouds lost their address and hence their cries falls down as rain'. Great.
Try to imagine beyond and write.
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